Comic 5 - The Beginning: Part 5

21st Nov 2019, 5:38 PM in The Beginning
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The Beginning: Part 5
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Saia 21st Nov 2019, 5:38 PM edit delete
...Oh, and when I first made this page the Switch had just been revealed. And ignore the misspelling of "weird" in the third panel.

I said this chapter was bad for a reason, you know.
Saia 9th Dec 2020, 4:14 PM edit delete
Version... 3?

Yeah, I just had to go back and remake this page. It was easily the worst part of the entire comic before now.

What changes did I make? Well, I made some minor changes to all the dialogue; and I added the bit about Kirby not knowing how to read and the joke about hammerspace, and removed the author character's yelling in the last panel.


shinystar678 7th Dec 2020, 9:18 PM edit delete reply
a reaction i'd do if i had a nintendo switch